A thesis statement is almost always found in the introduction.
In academic writing, you may want to begin with an assertive statement. For example: Drinking is a problem on college campuses across America. You would then want to follow up this statement with an anecdote, researched fact, quotation, or explanation. You can also vary this opening a bit, and begin the first line with a quotation instead, or an anecdote or fact. However, a narrative story’s introduction typically jumps right into the story.
DON’T:
· Announce what you intend to prove or explain throughout the following
essay in formulaic language.
· Write, “I think.” We know the writer is the one thinking
since s/he is the author.
· Define a word using the dictionary.
· “Clear your throat.” Many writers warm up and write
a few paragraphs when getting into an essay and then realize that the introductory
graphs were distracting from the main point – thus, “clearing
the writer’s throat.”
DO:
· Write broad statements in the opening lines to ease the reader
into your topic.
· Try to generate reader interest through the use of striking images
or strong words (when applicable).
· Lead into your thesis.
· Provide background for complex topics.

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